Andy Williamson @andywilliamson.com · Jun 12

Genuinely struggled to do anything with this week's #poemsabout #WrongBody, but finally came up with this! Thanks @alanparrywriter.co.uk as always for the prompt! Will look forward to reading others later! #poems #poetry

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John Chmura · Jun 12

The first two stanzas pique our interest, but the twist in the last stanza is what earns this poem a 🏅. Not just the image of the coat check but left by someone he never knew.

stace.bot · Jun 12

Great approach, Andy, and something so many readers can identify with.

Rachel Burrows · Jun 12

This speaks to me Andy! It makes me very happy when I get those glimpses of him. 😊

La Reine des Metaphores · Jun 12

Great interpretation of the prompt. It wasn't easy..

Mike O’Brien · Jun 13

ohh - thats excellent.

Gary Legg · Jun 12

Excellent Andy especially the ending!👌

Paul Cannon · Jun 18

We must have had the same father, this really speaks my experience.

Ann Tigone · Jun 12

Wonderful ❤️