Dana Van Allen @danablake.bsky.social · Dec 1 Um… maybe? 😬 CAN I KEEP YOU? A ghost hunter-turned-interior designer juggles two charming men, a toxic boss, and an oddly haunted house. Comps: a grown-up CASPER meets Netflix’s FALLING INN LOVE. #scriptsky
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1/6 Thanks for playing, Dana! Your logline and comps perfectly paint a picture of what this is. Your opening is visually well told, introducing a teasing mystery that's brightly contrasted by the second half of your page, where your dialogue is peppy and on-point...