Daniël

@danieldejong.io

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🏡 Curating the most relevant smart home news every week 👉 https://smarthomenewsletter.com 👨‍👩‍👧‍👦 Husband & dad | too many hobbies 👨‍💻Creator and maintainer of Multiscrape and MeasureIt custom integrations for Home Assistant

Graph showing a very steep increase in temperature halfway the day

The original was very close to perfect. The only technical improvements are the comma and the "to". The word choice is natural and the sentiment is clear. As a non-native speaker, you've written this very well.

Screenshot of Amazon link