Holly Jahangiri @jahangiri.us · Mar 27 1 / 2
Arizona morning: parched khaki desert opens its mouth, green tongue blooms fuchsia, sunrise yellow, smoke-white and blush - even the rocks redden in dawn's sight, clothed in pale blue sky. #poemsabout #inbloom
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Beyond the imagery, as so as I passed the line break after “open” pace of the poem really felt perfect. The brief pause on the line break is like a tipping point.