Jared Goring 🇨🇦 🇺🇦 @jaredgoring.com · May 25 #WIPSnips "Rain" from FotF#1, Fight or Flight I thought a book set almost entirely inside of a ship wouldn't have it…but it does! Molly gets taken into custody under suspicion of [bad things]. AL…does not react well to her absence.
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This is absolutely gut-wrenching. The choppy sentences, didactic tone, and lack of accuracy/ coherence in the facts screams stressed-to-breaking