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A manuscript card. Header: Chapter 18. The excerpt reads: '…homesick for the mountain village where she was born,' with 'mountain' highlighted. A PlotLens margin note points out: in Chapter 3 she grew up at sea, never saw a mountain, citing your own page. Headline: Sea, or mountains?
A manuscript card. Header: Chapter 24. The excerpt reads: '…she twisted the long braid hanging down her back,' with 'long braid' highlighted. A PlotLens margin note points out: in Chapter 5 she cut her hair to the chin, citing your own page. Headline: Long, or short?
A manuscript card. Header: The Feast, Two Pages Later. The excerpt reads: '…and he danced at the feast, no limp, no mention,' with 'no limp' highlighted. A PlotLens margin note points out: two pages back, an arrow went clean through his thigh, citing your own page. Headline: Healed already?
A manuscript page. Chapter 30, The Duel, reads: “…he parried the blade with his right hand.” A margin note from PlotLens points out: In Chapter 1, he signed the treaty with his left hand — citing your own page. Headline: Left, or right?
A manuscript page. Page Two reads: “…she reached the town, the moon already up.” A margin note from PlotLens points out: One page earlier, she left at first light — citing your own page. Headline: An hour’s walk?
A manuscript page. Chapter 19 reads: “…her younger brother came home for the holidays.” A margin note from PlotLens points out: In Chapter 2, she grew up an only child — citing your own page. Headline: Only child, or not?