Here's a screenshot of the body copy. There are a few tweaks I would make (I can see an oft-used and redundant "that" in the first paragraph, for example) but largely I think it does a great job. 🧵2/3
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Here's a screenshot of the body copy. There are a few tweaks I would make (I can see an oft-used and redundant "that" in the first paragraph, for example) but largely I think it does a great job. 🧵2/3
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