Teresa Robeson @teresarobeson.com · Jun 6 It’s Saturday, and you know what that means – hanging out with friends and writing #haiku 😄 I title this one “Nature Punctuated”: Ellipses party at the edge of their world, with comma chaperones. #HaikuSaturday
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Love this and the title is perfect!
I love everything about this. It's delightful and clever. Beautifully observed and captured!
Love love love this, Teresa! what a fresh take! 💜💜💜
Love this! So many connections between writing and nature, but I had never thought of amphibian eggs as ellipses! Fabulous symbolism as well. From here on out, I will think of tadpoles as commas...a brief pause between egg and frog. 😅
OMG, so perfect and original,Teresa! I WANT to go to this party! lol
There is a picture book lurking within. I’ll wait…
Comma! How perfect!
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