John Chmura · Feb 20

That’s a wonderful use of the form. I, for one, did not see those last two lines following the antepenult. 👏👏👏

Jen Thorne · Feb 21

Mike this is brilliant. I love it!!

Rachel Burrows · Feb 20

Fab!

Sue Ibrahim · Feb 20

Nice one, Mike 😊

C. Oulens · Feb 22

Love this, esp the structure.

Philippa Bowe · Feb 22

Love that structure, how you can read it in different ways! 💫

Debra J. Nordyke · Feb 22

Mike...WOW! An exquisitely written, technically sharp, lovely poem! It reads so well both ways! I absolutely admire how you accomplished such a beautiful piece in this form! Love it!💯❤️

DrNaturegirl · Feb 24

Love it! I missed it last week.

@paulrapley.bsky.social · Feb 24

We had a blue Marina. Not such happy memories attached, though.