John Chmura · Feb 27

Spent is so often a looking to the past, but this poem has adamant about no “backward glance,” and is, indeed, all in future tenses.

Jen Thorne · Feb 28

Love the language in this. It does feel like a classic 👏

La Reine des Metaphores · Feb 28

Nice one. I bet that was fun ? to write - I like a good sonnet.

Sue Ibrahim · Feb 28

Cleverly done. The form gives it gravity.

Merril D. Smith · Feb 28

So elegantly written, Mike--classic and heartfelt.