John Chmura · Mar 13

I’m with @fiftywords.bsky.social on this. The blurred moral lines and rationalization.

@singlecatlady23.bsky.social · Mar 13

That is a fantastic poem! Reminds me of my family. (Details redacted to protect all from the law).

Rachel Burrows · Mar 13

What a ride! Really enjoyed this Mike! 👏😊👏

Sue Ibrahim · Mar 13

Great take on the theme. Love 'twocked'.

Fiftywords · Mar 13

A lively, nostalgic poem that captures the reckless charm of youth and the blurred moral lines of teenage adventure.

Mike O’Brien · Mar 13

@johnchmura.bsky.social @fiftywords.bsky.social Cheers.. I really wanted them to seem like nice kids. Apart from the matter of the twocking🤣

Bernard Pearson · Mar 13

A feast of a ride atmospheric and immersive thanks for sharing

Merril D. Smith · Mar 13

Like John, I didn't know the slang term. I like this narrative, and it does come across as a teen boys and a harmless crime, but I can imagine it could have had a different, maybe deadly ending.

David Birch · Mar 13

Brilliant narrative with a beautifully matter-of-fact ending